In an adversarial legal system the quality of advocacy directly affects the outcome, and hence justice. This blog is for everyone -however they serve our legal system - who is committed to improving the teaching of advocacy skills and ethics so that parties and the community are well served by persuasive and ethical advocates.
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Saturday, August 22, 2015
NITA Brings Back the Trial Skills for Legal Services Attorneys Course
Wednesday, June 4, 2014
Editing Ourselves and Others: What We Can Learn from Writer's Workshops
Friday, April 25, 2014
Trip Report: Advocacy Training in Botswana
Friday, May 24, 2013
The Show-Me Challenge Voir Dire and Opening Statement Competition: A Coach's Report
Here is AJ's account of the competition.
Sunday, February 24, 2013
Courtroom Advocacy for Beginners:shaping an online approach
There are various reasons for more and better use of online resources in our advocacy training. For example, lack of teaching space, shortage of sufficiently experienced trainers, students who want to attend but can't because of work, timetable, and home task clashes, along with teaching and learning efficiencies such as recording one person explain a concept well, and offering mixed learning modes (eg. reading and listening).
Stetson's online Advocacy Resources Centre ( ARC) offers a useful collection of recorded presentations and interviews about various aspects of our craft. If you haven't yet used the ARC then click on the link to the right of this posting. You are bound to find items that you'll want your students to see, reflect upon, talk about, and enact.
Googling 'advocacy' + training brings up a very mixed bag of materials. For example, Charlie Rose's recent clips ( shared with you on this blog), along with Wes Porter's, present material with an informed awareness of what advocacy students need to master. On the other hand there are also clips, often thankfully very short, that are cringe inducing.
Hopefully most viewers will not find the following three clips 'cringe inducing'. They represent an experiment ,on a nil budget, to present the principles of beginner advocacy in a way that the beginner could follow, stop and start and replay, try out something, and complete with more awareness than they started with.
Here is an explanation of some of the 'features', included to help those who decide to make video clips avoid some of our errors and benefit from whatever strengths are found:-
1. The narrator is never seen. This is in sharp contrast to Charlie's style. The choice was made because we want the audience to listen carefully to the narration while viewing the messages (text screens and court room shots);
2. Whiteboard 'case analysis' shots are deliberately visible to the audience during samples of direct and cross of Jack. This is to encourage reinforcement.
3. There are obvious mistakes in what the student advocate does. Those have been left because too many people think this skill is easily acquired. We know better.
4. There is no example of either the opening address or closing. There should be, along with on screen annotations that comment on strengths and weaknesses;
5. Most screen text shots contain more text than is recommended. This was a trade off: was the viewer to be encouraged to mostly listen or mostly look? We opted for 'mostly listen' (but see also point 1 above).
6. At the end of each video there should be a short summary of what has been done.
7. There should be more 'You do it' points throughout - where the user is told by the narrator,
'Now, try this....'. For example, 'Set up your teaching room as a court room. Move through the roles of lawyer, witness and decision maker. The witness is to tell the Jack and Jill story three times with only this difference: look at their lawyer; look towards the decision maker; look down at the witness table. Comment on how you see the witness's position affecting their credibility'.
8. Despite writing the script and predetermining shots we still found, in the editing phase, that we needed more visual material AND more narration.
9. The time for editing is an 'n' multiple of the writing and shooting time, where 'n' is a larger number than your patience.
Please do have your students and colleagues try out the videos. Developing a good online teaching advocacy methodology is a challenge that we must meet.
This first of the three videos is about court room position, case components and case analysis:
This second of the three videos is about opening, closing, and direct:
And, this third of the three videos is about direct, cross, and objections:
Hugh Selby (c) February 2013.
Thursday, January 24, 2013
The Role of Outlining in Story-Telling
For law students and lawyers, reverse outlining is a counter-intuitive technique. Most legal writing professors teach law students that an outline, created at the beginning of the process, is the key to creating well-organized memoranda, motions and briefs. Many practicing lawyers write outlines before writing legal documents. These are sound practices, not to be gainsaid. Starting with a well-organized outline ensures thorough work and promotes efficiency.
For storytelling, however, outlining first can impede the writer's creativity and interfere with the development of the story. Creative writing teachers encourage students to begin with a free-writing exercise, not an outline. Rewriting and shaping the story that emerges from a free-write is an important part of the process.
So, what does this mean for us as lawyers and teachers? Perhaps we ought to re-think the way we teach our students to write their opening statements, in particular. If the story is key, we ought to encourage them to get the story right first, then outline the opening they've created, analyze it and plug in the legal framework of the case that comes from their case analysis.
I have recently experienced some success with focusing a group of students on the story of a case, rather than its legal analysis. (Here's a link to my recent blog post on the topic.) What I've noticed is an overall improvement in the quality of their work. In the past, I've had students focus lay out, in somewhat mechanical fashion, the elements of the claim or charge and how they intend to prove or disprove them. When that's done, we try to integrate a story line, but often it sounds wooden and contrived. This time, we did the story first. It's amazing to see how everything else falls into its proper place if the story is right.
Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Show-Me Challenge
Here's the link to the competition webpage: http://law.umkc.edu/show-me-challenge.asp
Tuesday, November 13, 2012
Lest We Forget . . . The Importance of Good Storytelling
Friday, June 8, 2012
Blog Post
Friday, October 21, 2011
A Storytelling Resource
As we all know, storytelling is an important part of good trial advocacy. In future posts, I intend to explore more thoroughly how to teach good storytelling to advocates. I feel this is an area in which we often fall short; I've long been frustrated with the standard "this case is about ________" formula we use so often in classes and at competitions. There's far more to good storytelling than a bumper sticker theme.
Recently, I was inspired by one of my trial ad students. Wanting to improve his advocacy skills, he enrolled in a Storytelling and Oral Tradition course at Southern Illinois University Carbondale. He loved the course and felt that it helped him immensely. I am planning to reach out to the Speech Communication Department at the school to see what collaborative opportunities we might be able to develop with this course; the opportunity for cross-campus collaboration is one of the real advantages of teaching at a law school on the campus of a comprehensive research university.
But in the meantime, after reading an article in an in-flight magazine on a recent trip, I've learned about and become enamored with The Moth, a storytelling program that works on developing and preserving the great American tradition of storytelling. Their website is http://themoth.org/. You can download podcasts of stories or even stream some of them live. Their website is a marvelous resource. On top of that, the stories are exceptional. I highly recommend going to the site and listening to a few stories. You won't regret it.
Thursday, July 7, 2011
Weak Evidence Trumps Bad Advocacy: The Casey Anthony Trial
Jim Gailey is the principal in the Miami Beach criminal defense and civil litigation firm James R. Gailey & Associates. He is also a NITA instructor and a trial team coach for the University of Miami School of Law in Coral Gables, Florida. Although he labors under the handicap of being a Miami Dolphins fan, he is nonetheless a great teacher and an astute observer of human nature. These are some of his observations about the Casey Anthony Trial.
The Quality of Advocacy at Trial
With the exception of the rebuttal final arguments (which were very good), the advocacy level went from good to below average. The prosecution advocacy was overall much better than the defense advocacy. Of course, at the end of the day it did not matter because the lack of any proof of HOW the child died, effectively intercepted any consideration of WHO did "it" (begs the question of what "it" actually was). So I suppose the lesson is that advocacy cannot substitute for evidence, and poor advocacy by your opponent will not save a case with no proof.
Much of what I saw could only serve as a model of what not to do ("would you please explain" questions on cross, etc.) (not quite as bad the in-court demo by the prosector in OJ case with the glove, but at least the prosecution lost and it provided a "teaching moment" on what not to do).
Not sure how we implore our students to only lead on cross or have a consistent theme, etc. when this did not affect the ultimate outcome.
What the Alternate Juror's Comments Teach About the Case
Here are some of the comments that the alternate juror made in an interview within an hour or two of the verdict.
"It was probably a horrific accident that Dad and Casey covered up and it snowballed and got away from them"
Since there was no evidence of an accident or a cover-up, the interviewer asked the obvious question: "What evidence was there that is snowballed and got away from them."
After some stuttering and stammering he then repeated that it was "such a horrific accident that they didn't know how to deal with it. And the family was very dysfunctional and instead of admitting to the accident they chose to hide it, for whatever reason." He was then asked why George Anthony would allow his daughter to face a potential death penalty instead of admitting to the horrific, innocent accident. In response, the alternate juror laughed and said "that's a really good question that has to be answered by George. He was very combative and I personally thought he was hiding something that he chose not to answer."
When asked about all the lies that she told for the 31 days after the child was last seen, he said that it "did not affect him much at all because of what came out at trial about how dysfunctional the family was." While this "dysfunction" was the suggestion by the defense opening statement, there was no actual testimony about this "dysfunction."
Until the deliberating jury decides to "cash in" on their new found fame, we will not know what the thought process of that jury was. The comments by the alternate however, do provide some insight into the workings of this particular jury and this particular trial. To me, it reemphasizes the special importance of the opening statement. The question of ethics aside, the jurors were "shown" a despicable picture of the defendant's father by accusing him, among other things, of molesting his daughter. Though the juror admitted that there was never any proof of this and consciously they did not reach the conclusion that he was in fact a child molester, it did create an image of him that colored how they viewed his testimony. (He was "combative" and was "hiding something.") Further evidence of the importance of the opening statement was that for 6 weeks both sides tried this circumstantial case with multiple experts and a great deal of forensic evidence. Nevertheless, the jurors deliberated without any questions and without any interest in hearing back any of this technical testimony or any of the videotaped statements or 911 calls. Their gut "told" them (or caused them to speculate) that there was more to this story than the prosecution had shown them and as a result, they outright rejected the notion that the defendant mother committed any crime in connection of the child's death.
I am sure that more will come out in the coming days and weeks and eventually, many of them will appear and the case will be analyzed more fully from their perspective. At this point, however, the result and the comments that we have heard thus far, seem to suggest that although we tend to glamorize the closing argument portion of the trial as making the difference, in many cases, the jury has pretty much made up its mind by that point in the trial and the less "glamorous" opening statement, shapes the lenses through which the jury will view the evidence and consequently affects the outcome in a more significant way. (Having myself served as a juror in a 1st degree murder trial while a law student, what i learned inside that particular jury room has shaped everything that I have done as a trial lawyer.)
--Jim Gailey. jgailey@gailey-law.com
Friday, April 8, 2011
Why Advocacy Education Matters
As John Baker, president of NITA, said in a recent post (available here)--advocates need training now more than ever. The burden is increasingly shifting from law firms and government agencies to law schools. When you read the article I've linked, scroll down to the bottom of the article and glance through the comments. Setting aside the predictable vitriol against this young man, many comments focus on . . . you guessed it, the quality of the legal education he received. I have no idea whether or not this young advocate took trial advocacy in law school, but from the description of his opening statement, my guess is that he did not--or if he did, he chose to ignore whatever he was taught.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
Opening Statements: Finding the Essence....
Monday, September 6, 2010
More on Language ,Word Choice, and Persuasion
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Hon. Robert L. McGahey, Jr.
I very much enjoyed Joe Lester’s recent post (available here) about language. It made me think of some problems I’ve noticed over the years with lawyers and that I’ve tried to correct with my students.
1. The TiVo moment. Q: “When the Defendant and the victim met up at the door, what did he say to him?” A: “He said: ‘What’s going on?’ Then he said: ‘Everything’s OK.’ Then he said: ‘I’m sure it is.’ Then I heard a gunshot.” Do you – or the jury -- have any idea of who said what to whom? Sloppy use of pronouns can produce what I refer to as TiVo moments: the factfinder has to pause the trial story for however long it takes to sort out what was said by what actor. By the time that’s done, the factfinder has to fast forward to catch up with the ongoing testimony -- and may have just missed the most significant testimony in the trial. This fix is easy: use names instead of pronouns. (Lawyers need to remember this in opening statements and closing arguments, too.)
2. False Qualifiers. How many of us have used a headnote like “Let’s talk a little bit about your educational background” or “I want to ask you a few questions about the intersection”? I suppose we say those kinds of things because we think it makes us sound more conversational. However, phrases like these are dangerous because they put a qualifier on the line of questions that follows. What if the fact finder’s “little bit” is shorter than the lawyer’s “little bit?” The juror stops listening when he reaches his “little bit” and may get seriously aggravated if counsel drones on after that. And you know that when someone says “a few questions,” some other persnickety person (like me) will start counting; the current leader in the clubhouse is 167 questions.
3. Watch out for the Grammar Police. The lawyer is winding up his so-far first- class opening statement: “At the end of this case, my client and me will ask you to bring back a verdict in the amount of one million dollars.” If a member of the Grammar Police (like my wife) is on that jury, the lawyer’s persuasive power just dropped like a stone. We need to make sure we use “I”, “me”, “him” and “her” correctly. The jury expects us to sound like educated people, albeit not stuffy, pompous or condescending ones.
4. PWC. Did I just say “albeit?” I shouldn’t have. My late Mother-in-Law was a grade school teacher for more than thirty years. One of her grading codes was “PWC” for “poor word choice.” Lawyers are notorious for this. We use legalisms, long words where short ones will do, or go the other way and attempt to sound “normal” by using inappropriate slang or catch-phrases. Clarity and understandability should be the keys. As Chris Tucker said in Rush Hour: “DO-YOU-UNDERSTAND-THE-WORDS-THAT-ARE-COMING-OUT-OF-MY-MOUTH?” Ooops. Sorry.
5. Words that mean something different to lawyers. This is a variant of PWC. An example: Q: “Let’s talk about your relationship with your boss.” A: (from indignant employee): “I don’t have a relationship with my boss! I’m just his administrative assistant, nothing more!” The word “relationship,” beloved of lawyers, clearly means something else to most civilians. The fix: Q: “Let’s talk about how you and Mr. Schmit get along at the office” or “Let’s talk about the way Mr. Schmit treats the people that he supervises.” There are lots of other words like this.
There are lots of other language mistakes that we all make every day. I’m not suggesting that we want to sound like Olivier doing Hamlet, but only that we remember that the words we use are some of the post powerful weapons in our arsenal -- and we want to deploy those weapons effectively.
Sunday, August 22, 2010
Things 'Good' Lawyers do Badly
Hon. Robert L. McGahey, Jr. [Bob is a trial judge, NITA instructor, and adjunct law school professor from Denver, Colorado].
I sit there on the bench, mentally reading myself for the blow. And sure as the sunrise, it comes: another “experienced” trial lawyer does something so painfully WRONG that the whole trial may be lost. Why does this happen? And how can we, who teach advocacy, help to stop it?
Some background: I’ve been a trial judge for more than ten years now, and have presided over civil, criminal and domestic courtrooms. Before that, I spent twenty-five years as a practicing trial lawyer, and tried over one hundred jury trials during that time. For about twenty-five years, I’ve been teaching at NITA programs on a regular basis. Finally, for about twenty years, on and off, I’ve been an adjunct professor at The Sturm College of Law, University of Denver, teaching both Basic and Advanced Trial Practice. Like Sergio Leone, I’ve seen the Good, the Bad and the Ugly. For this post, I want to concentrate on the Bad.
Let’s start at the very beginning: jury selection. The inability of even first-class lawyers to conduct a meaningful and useful voir dire is shocking. In a day and age when trial judges (including me) put time limits on voir dire, shouldn’t lawyers make the best use possible of those precious minutes? Instead, trial after trial, I see long, drawn out analogies or hypotheticals that leave the venire confused and glassy-eyed. Or a list of leading questions that simply ask the potential jurors to say “yes” or “no” without conveying any information about the jurors feelings or thoughts. Or the arrogant lawyer asking a trick question and then berating the juror who falls for the trick and gives a “civilian” wrong answer to a technical legal point. This is hardly an exhaustive list.
Or how about lawyers who don’t understand the value of starting off with a believable, interesting story as opposed to a dry recitation of facts. Thus, the opening statement where the droning of “the evidence will show,” goes on until the lawyer mercifully runs out of items on a checklist, even though the jury is now infected with a terminal case of “MEGO” (“my eyes glaze over.”) And at the other end of the trial, the attorney who thinks that arm-waving, voice-raising and snarky digs at the other side are a good substitute for a reasoned, logical, persuasive argument delivered with passion, not emotion.
Or how about failing to use exhibits to make complicated matters understandable? Or preparing experts so that they teach, but don’t lecture? Or understanding enough elementary stagecraft to avoid making important points when the jury is looking at your keester? Or, or.or…………
Obviously, one answer is better skills training in law school. (After all, this is an advocacy teaching blog!) Whether we’re full time faculty or part-timers, we owe it to our students to teach them the best techniques we can in the most effective way we can. That means we should constantly re-examine how we are teaching advocacy skills. We find great teachers or practitioners or judges to help us present concepts or ideas we may not be as good at presenting; I have my colleague, Judge Christina Habas, come in and teach my Advanced class about voir dire, because her thoughts on that are more intelligent and forward-thinking on that topic than anyone I know. We can talk to judges and find out what they think are the weak points of advocacy in their courtrooms. We can ask our friends in the teaching business how they do it; I’ve learned new ways to do stuff just by talking to Jeanne Jourdan and Charlie Rose and Chris Behan. We can look to “non-legal” sources for ideas and examples: Uta Hagen’s books on acting for how to develop empathy with an audience; Adam Gopnik’s Angels and Ages for how Lincoln and Darwin used language for “popular persuasion;” Gregory Peck as Atticus Finch delivering that most powerful “ask”: “In the name of God, do your duty. In the name of God, believe Tom Robinson.”
What we cannot do is make the mistake that so many lawyers make: believing that we are being informative, helpful and astute, when we are really being boring, confusing or wrong.
Monday, June 7, 2010
Today's trial as a learning and teaching tool -Blagojevich Trial 2010
Beyond that, the trial should be a useful vehicle for teaching trial advocacy. Because of the high-profile nature of the case, it is likely to receive heavy press coverage, including learned commentary from the punditocracy about the advocacy choices of the attorneys for both sides.
Check out this article from the Chicago breaking news service for a preview of the different styles likely to be on display during opening statements tomorrow.
A quote that stood out to me in the article was from Blagojevich's attorney, Sam Adam, Jr.: "The more you try to say things the way you think people want to hear them, the more you get away from what got you there in the first place." One of the hardest things to teach budding young attorneys is to rely on their own voices, and I don't think I've ever seen the point better phrased by anyone else.
I am convinced that integrating discussion about current cases can be a valuable part of teaching either a trial advocacy or an evidence course. Students thrive on making connections between what they are seeing in the courtroom (or reading about, or watching on television), and what is being taught in the classroom. Personal experience as a student, then a teacher, has taught me how important this connection can be.
I took a criminal trial practice class my third year of law school during the O.J. Simpson trial. Our class was taught by two seasoned criminal defense attorneys, who took full advantage of the teaching opportunity posed by the trial. We spent the first ten or fifteen minutes of each class discussing the case. The insights they provided about strategy, tactics, and decisions of counsel were invaluable, and helped me catch a glimpse of just how complex and difficult trial work can be. Until I took that class, I thought the world of appellate cases and advocacy represented the pinnacle of the lawyer's art; after the class was over, I felt differently, and I made my career choices accordingly.
So-I'll be paying close attention to the Blagojevich case. As an Illinois resident, I'm interested to know whether Blagojevich will join George Ryan in the Illinnois Governors' Wing of the Terre Haute Federal Correctional Institute. As a student of the human condition, I'm looking forward to witnessing a drama of potentially Shakespearean dimensions (after all, we have on trial a man with few inhibitions, who has promised to testify in his own defense, and who would not hesitate to drag the President of the United States down with him). And as a teacher of trial advocacy, I plan to be alert to opportunities to enhance my classroom instruction with a dose of real life.